Systems
Cold DM That Gets Replies
The reason cold messages get ignored is almost never the wording. It is that message one asks for something. Somebody who has never heard of you opens a note that wants their time, their call, or their money, and the only reasonable answer is no. So flip it. Message one gives. It says something true and specific about them, names a problem they already feel, hands over one useful thing for free, and ends with a question that is easy to answer. No pitch. The pitch comes later, after they reply, once you have earned the right to make it.
The prompt
Act as an outreach copywriter. Write 5 cold messages (DM, LinkedIn, or email) for my service, each under 70 words. Each opens with something specific about THEM (leave a [bracket]), names one problem I noticed or they likely have, gives one quick win or insight for free, and ends with a low-pressure question — never a pitch. Angles: compliment, observation, question, quick tip, mutual connection. Then write the day-3 and day-7 follow-ups (under 30 words each). Rule: message one gives; it never asks. Pull my offer, audience, voice, and proof points from my Money AI DNA™ before you write. If anything you need isn’t in my DNA, ask me two questions first — don’t guess. Anti-generic rule: if any line could sit on a competitor’s page unchanged, rewrite it until it couldn’t.
How to use it
Fresh chat, paste it, answer the two questions it asks if it does not already know your offer and your audience. You get five messages across five angles plus the two follow-ups. Do not send all five to the same person. Pick the angle that fits who you are writing to, fill the bracket with something real you actually noticed, and send it. The bracket is the whole job. A message with a lazy bracket is a template and it reads like one.
What to change
Seventy words is a ceiling, not a target. Shorter usually wins in a DM. Slightly longer is fine in email. If the quick win it writes is generic, change it. The free thing you hand over in message one should be something only you would think to say. That is the entire difference between your message and the forty others in their inbox. Cut any line that compliments them on something visible from their profile picture.
What good looks like
Read it back and ask one question. Could I send this to a hundred people without changing a word? If yes, it is not ready. A good one sounds like somebody who did ten minutes of homework and wanted nothing back. You will know it is landing when replies start with an answer to your question instead of a polite thank you. Send twenty a day. Two replies a day is a client a week.